Here is my script for the ebullient pepper mill, at the moment it is really rough and it does need some fine tuning but at the moment I am happy with how my story is going.
Hey Sasha - I think this is going to be really nice - but you've got too much content - both in terms of your drawing it all, and also in terms of the running time. I suggest you make the domino sequence of Act 3 your Act 2, and just have the 'consequence' of the peppermill's excitement your Act 3. Just streamline your action a little bit more.
Hey Sasha - I think this is going to be really nice - but you've got too much content - both in terms of your drawing it all, and also in terms of the running time. I suggest you make the domino sequence of Act 3 your Act 2, and just have the 'consequence' of the peppermill's excitement your Act 3. Just streamline your action a little bit more.
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